Week 7 Story: Copper and the Magic Book


Read my story in my portfolio here: Copper and the Magic Book

In the kingdom of Anvil lived a boy who went by the name of Copper. Copper was the youngest kid in his family, having one older brother whose name was Nickel, but went by Nick, and one older sister whose name was Diamond. Copper's father was a craftsman and worked in a forge building swords for King Platee's enormous army. Copper's mother was a stay at home mom, who was at one point a teacher, but now stayed home and did homeschooling with the kids. When Copper was 8 years old, there was a large war that broke out between the kingdom of Anvil and the nearby kingdom of Hammer. Copper, who loved to see his dad's swords, began helping his father in his forge in order to make enough swords to supply King Platee's army. 
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The famous sword of King Platee...
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One day when Copper and his father were working in the forge, a group of soldiers came in and said to Copper, "Son, what are you doing in such a dangerous place? You could be seriously burned or even die!" Copper's father responded, "He has been working in the forge with me for quite some time, and I need all the help I can get." They went about their business, but this encounter left Copper a little distressed. All this time he had thought that what he was doing was fun and didn't consider the fact that making swords was dangerous at all. 

The war that was taking place between these two kingdoms was over resources, and primarily lumber. Lumber was used to make all the buildings in both kingdoms and to provide warmth in homes in the form of fire. Copper's father also used the lumber, along with some gun powder to keep his forge running hot, so that he could forge the metal to create swords with. The kingdom of Hammer had a plentiful amount of lumber and was not willing to share with the Kingdom of Anvil. Anvil's largest resources were crops and other food items, which they had always been gracious enough to share with the other kingdoms. 

On his way home one day, Copper stopped by a marketplace that he liked to get food from, and he went into his favorite restaurant to get a meal. When he walked in, he noticed no one was working in the front. He decided to go into the back-kitchen area, and found only one worker there, but it wasn't one of the regular workers. In fact, Copper had never seen this man before in his life. 

The strange man looked down at Copper and said, "What brings you here little child?" 

Copper stated, "I was wanting to get some food, but it looks like there is only one of you here, so if it's too much trouble, I can go elsewhere." 

The man looked back at him and said, "I have something greater than food to offer you." The man then reached for a book, which Copper had thought to have been a cookbook, and handed it to the boy.

Copper said, "What is this?" 

The man responded, "This is the answer to the war..."

Copper thought nothing of it at first and left the market to go home. When he got home, he opened the book. It was filled with weird symbols and rituals that ancient sorcerers once used. He found one titled, "The Eternal Flame," and quickly began reading it. 

Over the next several weeks, Copper returned back to help in his father's shop, and thought nothing of the book that he was given. The kingdom had almost completely run out of lumber, and both Copper and his father knew that within the next day or so, they would be completely unable to make any more weapons. That was until one day, when Copper was reaching for a red-hot piece of metal and his father yelled, "Be careful Copper, that one will be very hot, for it has been in the fire for quite some time now!" Copper looked at the glowing red piece of metal and picked it up. He felt nothing though. The hot metal didn't burn him at all, and he yelled back at his father, "Are you sure? I was able to pick it up with my bare hands." Upon hearing this, Copper's father quickly ran over to see what the child was talking about and he saw that his son had truly picked the metal up with his bare hands. His father was stumbled, and amazed. Copper then remembered the book the strange man had given him. He looked at his father and said, "Father, I know how to stop the war!" 

 The powers that Copper had received from the man in the book went further than just touching hot objects and not being burned by them. Copper was able to create fire without using any lumber. His father took him to the King and showed him what the boy could do, and the King praised Copper and his father and said, "The war is ended! We have an eternal fire!" Copper used his powers to create a furnace system that could generate enough heat to be distributed to the entire kingdom. Once this had happened, the war was ended, and the Kingdom of Anvil no longer sent food to the Hammer Kingdom, and eventually, the Hammer Kingdom fell. 

Author's Note:
While I was reading the stories from the African Unit titled "African Stories from Lang's Fairy Books" written by Andrew Lang, I was able to find many of them were about heroic characters or clever characters and I really enjoyed learning about the different kingdom and people that these stories were about. This story is based primarily off of the story of Hassebu. Hassebu was a boy who couldnt learn any useful practices, but was able to read. One day his mother sent him off with some lumber jacks to cut and sell wood so that he could make some money. Hassebu's father was a renowned doctor in the city and Hassebu wanted to be one as well. After getting taken advantage of and left to die by the lumber jacks, Hassebu came across a king who was able to change his life forever. This story is about a boy named Copper and how he was able to save his kingdom after a war broke out between his kingdom and a nearby kingdom. The story shows how at one point, Copper could only help his father a little, but then after meeting a strange man who mysteriously gave him powers, he was able to become the hero of the story. Hope you enjoy it!

Bibliography: Andrew Lang, The Orange Fairy Book, Lang's Fairy Books





Comments

  1. Hi Randy!
    Great story it was such a great read. It was clever to name the young boy copper and his brother Nickel. Your twist on the story Hassebu who found what he liked to do could be useful like Copper! Your description and writing is so great too! It really helped me as the reader paint a picture of the story. Great job on your story and I hope you have a great semester! Best wishes!

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  2. Hi Randy,

    Great story that you wrote here, I really enjoyed it. I found it humorous that you used the names Copper, Nickel, and Diamond for the characters in your story. They had a theme to them. Impressive how that one book that the stranger gave copper basically saved the Kingdom of Anvil and ended the war. I will say, I was a little scared when copper got that hot piece of metal that his father had told him was very hot. I really thought he was going to burn himself and something bad was going to happen.

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  3. Hi Randy! This was a great interpretation of the original story. I really enjoyed your usage of theming with the character names and kingdoms. It’s funny how instead of food, Copper got cool magic powers. I’d say that’s a pretty sweet deal. This was a large-scale story to tell and you did a wonderful job doing it! It was clear and easy to follow. Great work!

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